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cumulative sentences or periodic pattern
Periodic sentence
Unable to eat dinner, do my homework, or get any sleep, I could think only of my mother's surgery the next morning
Cumulative sentence
All I could think about was of my mother's surgery the next morning, I was unable to eat dinner, do my homework, or get any sleep.

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asked by Robert
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    The first sentence is OK.

    The second is a run-on. Please fix it.
    http://grammar.about.com/od/rs/g/runonsentenceterm.htm

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