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What is a good thesis statement according to the disagreement of gay marriage?

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asked by Judy
  1. I have no idea. What do YOU want to say about gay marriage?

    Have you written the outline for your paper yet? In drafting your outline, you should come up with your thesis statement.

    Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your paper. (If your statement is simply factual, then there's nothing to prove!)

    http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
    This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into real thesis statements.

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