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i need help finding mistakes in this paragraph my teacher said there's 9 can you help me find it? The assignment is to First correct it the mistakes in the paragraph. than re- wright it the passage correctly in cursive. I'll show you,
Yesterday was the death a vary good friendship. I said some cross words.Mary snapped back. Arguments can be over littel things. The hole thing was silly. My advise to my self is to let some time coast by and than try torpair the friendship. Every one has bad days.
I already found 3. i'm stuck, HELP!!!!

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