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I am writing a story about a girl who is living a stable life that she has created for herself. However, her biological sends her a letter apologizing for putting her up for adoption and telling she wants to see her. She is very confused. My last paragraph states that she goes into her care to leaves. Nevertheless, I need help because I need to create another conflict.
Conflicts:
1st= letter from mom
2nd =

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asked by bill
  1. I'm not sure what this means:
    "My last paragraph states that she goes into her care to leaves."
    Could you explain, please?

    Your first conflict is an external one; you could have your second conflict be internal -- the internal discussion the girl has within her mind about whether to see her mom or not.

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