English/Writing Help Please?

posted by Jennifer Haley

Help with sentence structure....

In a response to the uproar on January 30, 2017 legislation presented the House with the HB 631 bill which will forbid a wholesale distributor from increasing a price on vital medication, under definite statuses.


Stages of bill hearing,votes, amendments etc,


Vote - Senate - Committee – Finance, Vote - House Floor - Third Reading Passed (137-4) – March 17, 2017, Vote - House Floor - Third Reading Passed (137-2) – April 02, 2017, Vote - Senate Floor - Floor Amendment {683326/1 (Senator Hershey) Vetoed (13-32) – April 01, 2017, Vote - Senate Floor - Floor Amendment {893327/1 (Senator Hershey).

  1. Writeacher

    In a response to the uproar on January 30, 2017, legislation presented the House with HB 631, a bill which would forbid a wholesale distributor from increasing a price on vital medication under specific statutes.

    Who or what is "legislation"?

    Pay attention to the changes I made, including commas.

    Let us know if you have questions.

  2. Jennifer Haley

    I appreciate the help. But, I am stuck on putting in complete sentences. I really need help!!!!

    Senate - Committee – Finance, Vote - House Floor - Third Reading Passed (137-4) – March 17, 2017, Vote - House Floor - Third Reading Passed (137-2) – April 02, 2017, Vote - Senate Floor - Floor Amendment {683326/1 (Senator Hershey) Vetoed (13-32) – April 01, 2017, Vote - Senate Floor - Floor Amendment {893327/1 (Senator Hershey).

  3. Writeacher

    You must do the writing. We can check it for you, but we won't do your writing for you. Sorry.

  4. Jennifer Haley

    That's not what I am asking. I don't anyone to do my work it's already done. I need help on how to structure what I wrote. Thank You!

  5. Writeacher

    Then I don't understand what you need.

    1. I redid the sentence at the top of this thread of posts, but you never answered my question about the word "legislation" -- and without knowing what you intend that to mean, the sentence is meaningless.

    2. Then you said you didn't need help on that, but you had to take that group of words and make sentences out of them (which is not what you said at first). I don't understand that particular assignment because I don't see any way to make all those labels or subtopics go together smoothly.

    3. And finally, you say that's not what you're asking. So really ... what ARE you asking for help with??

  6. Writeacher

    https://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1511549731

    This earlier post is equally unclear. You seem to have two assignments going on here.

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