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Revise the following word groups to remove all fragments and/or parallelism errors.

I like baseball because it is fun and teaches me about the sport.

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I like baseball, it teaches me about the sport and it’s also fun.

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    You still have a run-on in there. Where should you divide this into 2 sentences?

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    Well, wait!

    In addition to dividing this into two complete sentences, you also need to do something about the strange phrasing. This doesn't make sense to me: "it teaches me... "

    What is "it"?

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