posted by Andrew .
Revise the following word groups to remove all fragments and/or parallelism errors.
I like baseball because it is fun and teaches me about the sport.
I like baseball, it teaches me about the sport and it’s also fun.
You still have a run-on in there. Where should you divide this into 2 sentences?
In addition to dividing this into two complete sentences, you also need to do something about the strange phrasing. This doesn't make sense to me: "it teaches me... "
What is "it"?