Business Communications - English 101

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revised.... just wanted to make sure I did these two paragraphs correctly. This is for an interoffice memo It was given to us with no punctuation and all sentences ran together. Thank you

Ed, I have made several changes to our staff to help accommodate the additional shifts our company established to keep up with production. I wanted to keep you informed of the changes I have made.

Howard Clark will be the supervisor for the third shift; Betty Miller will be the supervisor for the Saturday shift; and Clarence Hill will be the supervisor for the Sunday shift. They are all to report directly to me. However, I think I am starting to come down with something since I have been coughing and sneezing all day. If I should have to be out over the next two or three days, would you check with these three for me?

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    Perfect!! Nice!

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