Business Communications - English 101
posted by MaryBeth .
This is one paragraph in an interoffice memo. Should it be a semicolon instead of two separate sentences? Also, it is an interoffice memo, should company be capitalized? Thanks!
Ed, I have made several changes to our staff to help accommodate the additional shifts our company established to keep up with production. I wanted to keep you informed of the changes I have made.
Definitely a period and a separate sentence is needed. No, company should not be capitalized.