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FYI it's in ALL caps because our teacher requires it.. But can someone read through my story I got off mlive and see if some corrections need to be made. I'm not sure If i did it right

FORMER DETROIT POLICE OFICER IS ACCUSED OF LYING IN COURT IN ORDER TO KEEP A TEEN IMPRISIONED FOR MURDER. PROSECUTOR KYM WORTHY HAS CHARGED WILLIAM RICE WITH TWO COUNTS OF PERJURY TODAY—STEMMING FROM HIS TESTIMONY. DAVONAE SANFORD WAS 14 IN 2007 WHEN DETROIT HOMICIDE DETECTIVES ACCUSED HIM OF QUADRUPLE KILLING. SANFORD PLEADED GUILTY TO FOUR COUNTS OF SECOND-DEGREE MURDER IN 2008. SANFORD IS NOW 20—AND LOCKED UP IN THE IONIA CORRECTIONAL FACILITY… HIS EARLIEST RELEASE DATE IS IN 2046— ACCORDING TO THE MICHIGAN DEPARTMENT OF CORRECTIONS INMATE WEBSITE. RICE IS SCHEDULED TO BE ARRAIGNED ON PERJURY CHARGES TOMORROW AT 1:00 P.M.

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