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How would you reword this sentence to make it easier to understand?

In other words, giving up results in goals much harder to achieve, thus persevering really makes a difference.

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    First of all, it's not a complete sentence without a main verb.

    Next, try something like this:

    It's better to ... than to ...

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    I can't use contractions or "to be" verbs in my essays.

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    I don't understand what you're trying to say in that sentence.

    Persevering brings more satisfaction than giving up your goals.

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