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revise the following sentences to eliminate faulty sentence structure, making them clear and grammatically need help with the following sentences:

An effective Web site is well designed, provides useful information, and links are given to other relevant sites.

To enroll in film school being my primary goal, so I am always saving my money and watching for scholarship opportunities.

The equipment in our new warehouse is guaranteed to last longer than our current facility.

Irony is when you expect one thing and get something else.

By turning off the water when you brush your teeth, saving up to eight gallons of water per day.

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    Here's the first one. As you can see, I revised to have a parallel structure.

    An effective Web site is well designed, provides useful information, and gives links to other relevant sites.

    I'll be glad to check your revisions of the other sentences.

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    thanks

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    can please review the other ones

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    need help with this one: To enroll in film school being my primary goal, so I am always saving my money and watching for scholarship opportunities.

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    See Writeacher's recommendation.

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