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Traveling to Fukuoka
About ten years ago, I went to Fukuoka, Japan. I went there by ship. In Fukuoka, I visited a bookstore. It was important to buy English books there at that time. I always feel great twhen I look at this picture.

(Would you check this writing? Correct errors, please. Thank you.)

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    All is fine except the spelling of "when" in the last sentence. =)

  • English -

    Your sentences sound choppy. I think that you should connect the sentences to make them smoother.
    For example: Ten years ago, I traveled to Fukuaka, Japan by ship. While in Fukuoka, I visited a bookstore and bought English books. Looking at this pictures reminds me of the great times I had on my trip to Japan.

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