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Which of the following would be the best revision of these sentences? "Our present receivables are in line with last year's. However, they exceed the budget. The reason they exceed the budget is that our goal for receivable investment was very conservative."
A. "Receivables are in line with last year's. They exceed the budget. Our goal for receivable investment was very conservative."

B. "The receivable investment was very conservative."

C. "Our present receivables are in line with last year's because they exceed the budget."

D. "Our present receivables, while in line with last year's, exceed the budget because our goal for receivable's days out was too aggressive

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