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1) Robinson defeats the mutineers and rescues the legitimate crew. At last, Robinson and the ship’s crew sail back to England.
2) After 28 years on the island and 35 years of total absence from England, Robinson finally returns home.
Friday is described as a fascinating, good-looking young man in his late twenties.
3) He is well-built with strong, straight legs and a very soft and sweet look, which makes him resemble a European. He has long, black hair, a large forehead, sharp and sparkling eyes. His round, plump face contrasts (is in contrast is a mistanke?) with his small nose and his bright, olive complexion.
4) Robinson praises him for not looking too much like a typical savage.
5) His hair is not curled like wool as that of a savage is, whereas his skin, though not quite black, is very tawny, but not yellowish. His nose, though small, is not flat like that of the negroes (as flat as that of the negroes).

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    1) Robinson defeats the mutineers and rescues the legitimate crew. At last, Robinson, Friday, and the ship’s crew sail back to England.

    2) OK

    3) He is well-built with strong, straight legs and a very soft, sweet look, which makes him resemble a European. He has long, black hair, a large forehead, and sharp sparkling eyes. His round, plump face contrasts with his small nose and his bright, olive complexion.
    ["is in contrast" is not a mistake; it's just wordy!]

    4) Robinson praises him for not looking too much like a typical savage.
    [Was there a standard for "typical savage" in those days?]

    5) His hair is not curled like wool as that of a savage is, whereas his skin, though not quite black, is very tawny, but not yellowish. His nose, though small, is not flat like that of a negro.

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