How can I revise this sentence?
with the addition of a lexical and skills syllabus on biology. (therminology used in biology to describe biodiversity)
1) Do you think that the following should be included into the objectives or the results of students' analyses on water?
2) Expected results
to monitor and protect endangered aquatic species as well as their habitats
3) collect scientific data to be used in future management plans and species protection recovery
increase public awareness on local biodiversity issues
4) improve cooperation in environmental protection by involving the local population in nature protection
Do you think my English has improved?
...with the addition of a lexical and skills syllabus of the terms used to describe aquatic biodiversity.
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1) Do you think that the following should be included in the objectives or the results of students' analyses on water?
Expected results
~ to monitor and protect endangered aquatic species, as well as their habitats.
~ to collect scientific data to be used in future management plans and species protection and recovery.
~ to increase public awareness on local biodiversity issues.
~ to improve cooperation by involving the local population in environmental protection activities.
To revise the sentence, "with the addition of a lexical and skills syllabus on biology (therminology used in biology to describe biodiversity)," you can consider rephrasing it to make it clearer and more concise. Here's a possible revision:
"By incorporating a biology-focused lexical and skills syllabus, which covers terminology related to biodiversity in particular, we can enhance the curriculum."
Regarding your other questions:
1) To improve the clarity of your question, you can consider revising it as follows:
"Do you think that including the objectives or the results of students' analyses on water in the curriculum would be beneficial?"
2) The provided line, "Expected results to monitor and protect endangered aquatic species as well as their habitats," seems clear and does not require revision.
3) The third line, "collect scientific data to be used in future management plans and species protection recovery," can be revised for precision:
"Collecting scientific data to inform future management plans and aid in species protection and recovery efforts."
4) The fourth line, "improve cooperation in environmental protection by involving the local population in nature protection," can be revised for clarity:
"Enhancing cooperation in environmental protection by actively engaging the local population in nature preservation."
Regarding your final question:
To determine if your English has improved, it would be helpful to have more information or examples of your writing or speaking before and after the timeframe you are referring to. This would allow for a more accurate evaluation.