English

posted by .

I urgently need to write a short email to a scholar specialized in Comenius projects.


After presenting myself and the school I'd like to include this:

1) As you are a scholar with an in-depth knowledge of Clil within a Comenius project, I would like to have your personal opinion on the partnership of our school with these two other European schools.
2) Do you think our science topic is too limited and therefore fails to adhere to European standards?
3) Do you believe we should find an English-speaking partner willing to join the project, which could help us build a science vocabulary?
4) I wonder if you could help us find a suitable English high school which may be interested in working on such a project.
5) I thank you very much for cooperating with us. We would be pleased/honoured if you could hold a lecture on Clil at our school.

  • English -

    What is "Clil"?

    Delete the word "personal" in #1; it's redundant.

    #4. Could you help us find... ?

    Everything else is fine.

Respond to this Question

First Name
School Subject
Your Answer

Similar Questions

  1. English

    I urgently need you to revise the following sentences I have to include in an email. 1) Thank you for answering my last email and letting me know you are going to find another theme for our Comenius project with your French partner. …
  2. English

    I urgently need you to revise this email. Thank you very much in advance. 1) My science colleague is willing to work on a project in English concerning ecology with some of her students in the years 10-11. 2) Though we haven't got …
  3. English

    I urgently need your to revise these statements. Thank you. 1) Our science teachers are enthusiastic about the idea of carrying out a common science project in English with both your and the French school. 2) However, the head of our …
  4. English

    I urgently need you to check a few sentences 2-4 which I need to include in an email. 1)The universe was conceived in the forms of a chain of being and a cosmic dance. (Can I replace "in the forms of" with "like" or "as"?
  5. English

    Sentence number 5 was incomplete. I think I should leave out "in part two". I urgently need you to have a look at these other sentences, too 1) I hope you can help me find a Scottish school which is interested in a partnership with …
  6. English

    I urgenlty need you to chekc these sentences. Thank you. 1) As you are a scholar with an in-depth knowledge of Clil within a Comenius project, I would like to have your opinion about the objectives we should include in the project. …
  7. English

    I left out a few other things I would like to include in an email. Thank you very much. 1) Unfortunately, we have just sent in our Comenius proposal for a science project on biodiversity in water with a German and a French school. …
  8. English

    I urgently need you to check this message I need to include in an email. Thank you, Writeacher. 1) Our students have started receiving post from their new Irish partners. It would be nice if you could send me a list of the students …
  9. English

    I urgently need you to help me find the proper words. Thank you Writeacher 1) Thank you very much for sending me the list of your students. I was thinking of creating a link to our partnership ( I don't know how to express this) on …
  10. Language Arts

    Which of the following correctly revises the the sentence so that it is entirely in the active voice?

More Similar Questions