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I forgot to include the following statemets. Can you check them too? Thank you


1) The isolation of the hero can turn into (is “to” possible’) madness.
This expedient turns (the?) actors into audience
2) Humans are reluctant to take their own lives and prefer to tolerate 44earthly sorrows and tragedies.
3) He regards cowardice as the ability to stay alive and courage as the ability to cross the border between life and death.
4) Hamlet thinks of death as sleep. (thinks about death as a sleep is wrong?).
5) Hamlet wants to be sure about (correction: of?) Claudius’s guiltiness. (or guilt?)
6) He considers death as a sleep. This image wasn’t new to Shakespeare’s audience.
Hamlet is a revenge tragedy because it has the main features of it.

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    1) The isolation of the hero can send him into madness.
    This expedient turns actors into audience.

    2) Generally, humans are reluctant to take their own lives and prefer to tolerate earthly sorrows and tragedies.

    3) OK

    4) Hamlet thinks of death as sleep. (thinks about death as a sleep is wrong?). <~~yes, that's incorrect; don't use the phrasing

    5) Hamlet wants to be sure about Claudius’s guilt or innocence.

    6) He considers death as sleep. This image wasn’t new to Shakespeare’s audience.

    Hamlet is a revenge tragedy because the main character is seeking to avenge his father's murder.

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    "He considers death as sleep."

    That's still pretty awkward. Use this instead: He thinks of death as sleep.

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