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posted by Henry2

could you please check these sentences? Thank you.

1) Today we celebrated our son’s birthday. We had a delicious strawberry cake made by the hotel cook and we bought some drinks for his birthday party.
3) After the party the kids club’s entertainer organized a treasure hunt in the hotel.
3) My child had a lot of fun and was asked to hold a speech for his birthday.

  1. Writeacher

    1. comma needed

    2. comma needed

    3. OK

    Good job! Do you see where the commas are needed?

  2. Anonymous

    write a birthday invitation card to a teacher you like

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