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I urgently need to revise this paragraph about a program called "Lost".

1) Lost was first transmitted (broadcast) by ABC in 2004. It was soon very popular because of its unusual plot.
2) Lost is the story of the survivors of a plane crash in the Pacific Ocean. The flight took off in Sydney and (the plane /is it necessary??) was flying to Los Angeles, when suddenly the engine stopped and the plane fell out of the sky crashing into the sea.
3) 48 passengers survived the crash and swam to a small island. Luckily, they found part of their plane and cooked and ate food from it. Then they built small houses from trees.
4) While they were living on the island, they went through a lot of frightening experiences.
5) While they were walking in the jungle, for example (?); they saw a huge polar bear.
6) One day they discovered that other people were living on the island but they weren’t friendly at all.

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    1) Lost was first broadcast [or "aired"] by ABC in 2004. It was soon very popular because of its unusual plot.

    2) Lost is the story of the survivors of a plane crash in the Pacific Ocean. The flight took off in Sydney, heading to Los Angeles, when suddenly the engine stopped, and the plane fell out of the sky and crashed into the sea.

    3) Forty-eight passengers survived the crash and swam to a small island. Luckily, they found part of their plane and cooked and ate food from it. Then they built small houses from trees.

    4) OK

    5) While they were walking in the jungle, for example, they saw a huge polar bear. (Did the plane crash north of the Arctic Circle somewhere?)

    6) One day, they discovered that other people were living on the island, but those people weren't friendly at all.

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