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I left out the following statements. Could you please if they are possible, please?

1) Oscar Wilde was a great novelist. Moreover/Furthermore/Further/ he wrote very funny comedies. Italy is wonderful. In addition, Italian people are very friendly.
2) This hotel is very big as well as (being) modern. Besides being modern./ Besides being modern, this hotel is very big. This hotel is very big in addition to being modern.
3) I like carrots. What’s more/On top of that, they are rich in vitamins.

  • English -

    1. Moreover and furthermore are OK, but "further" sounds awkward or something. Not quite right.

    2. Delete "(being)" -- all the rest are fine.

    3. OK

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