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I left out a sentence. I don't know which form is best.

1)I would be really grateful to you if you could send me the names of Irish high schools which might be interested in a partnership with our school.
2) It doesn't matter if German is not taught at their school.

3) (It would be nice of you if you could send me ...... Is it correct??)

  • English -

    1 and 2 - OK

    3. Too wordy. Try this: Please send me...

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