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PLEASE Help me create a better thesis statement than this:
Three arguments can be identified in “The Private History of a Campaign That Failed” that support the idea that war isn’t for everyone.
The arguments are that soldiers should be adequately trained before entering a war, soldiers should consist of men not boys, and war could be traumatizing for the weak of mind.
Scroll down to the post by Com 156. Read and study all the information in the two linked webpages I gave that student. Follow all directions.