Thank you. A few more things. I'd like you to check the word choice.
1)It is necessary to distinguish among three kinds of interior monologue. In the indirect interior monologue the narrator never lets the character’s flow of thoughts be without control, and maintains logical and grammatical organization. (You have already checked the rest).
2) The flowers are presented not as statically as in a painting, but (as) alive with motion. (is "as" necessary?)
3)I'd like you to explain why the 20s were good times for the Americans. What were the twenties called and what were they characterized by?
4) What did the 18th Amendement to the Constitution state?
How did British society change between the wars? (Also: What transformation did British society undergo../What transformation affected British society ..?
5) When considering Joyce's Eveline is he pronunciation of Eveline with initial "i" (ivlin) or "e" (evlin)?
6) How do you pronounce "Keynes"?
7) What did the Nazis mean by final solution? When did the Jews start to be sent to concentration camps? On the night of November 9-10 1938 (How do you read this date?)
1)It is necessary to distinguish among three kinds of interior monologue. In the indirect interior monologue the narrator never lets the character’s flow of thoughts be without control, and maintains logical and grammatical organization. (You have already checked the rest).
"never lets the character's flow of thoughts be without control" = the character's flow of thoughts are always controlled??
2) The flowers are presented, not statically as in a painting, but alive with motion.
Neither of the instances of "as" is needed.
3)I'd like you to explain why the 20s were good times for the Americans. What were the twenties called and what were they characterized by?
The 1920s are often referred to as the Roaring Twenties. One reason people were generally happier was because the Great War (later called World War I) was over. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roaring_Twenties
4) What does the 18th Amendment to the Constitution state?
How did British society change between the wars? (Also: What transformation did British society undergo../What transformation occurred in British society ..? Any of these alternative phrasings will work.
5) When considering Joyce's Eveline is he pronunciation of Eveline with initial "i" (ivlin) or "e" (evlin)?
I would probably pronounce it with a short "e" sound (as in egg), but since this man's name ((Broken Link Removed) is pronounced with a long "e" (as in eve), I'd use the long "e" -- eve-lynn.
6) How do you pronounce "Keynes"?
Like this: Keenz
7) What did the Nazis mean by final solution? When did the Jews start to be sent to concentration camps? On the night of November 9-10 1938 (How do you read this date?)
I'd read the date like this: November ninth and tenth, 1938
http://www.answers.com/topic/final-solution
1) The word choice in the first sentence seems appropriate. The use of "distinguish" accurately conveys the idea of differentiating between three kinds of interior monologue. The phrase "logical and grammatical organization" effectively suggests that the narrator maintains control over the character's thoughts in a structured manner.
2) The word "as" in the second sentence is not necessary for clarity. Both versions, "The flowers are presented not as statically as in a painting" and "The flowers are presented not statically like in a painting," convey the same meaning. However, if you prefer to include "as," it adds a slight emphasis on the comparison between the flowers and a painting, emphasizing the difference in motion.
3) The 1920s in America are commonly referred to as the "Roaring Twenties" or the "Jazz Age." This decade was characterized by economic prosperity, technological advancements, cultural dynamism, and social changes. The economy experienced a boom, and there was an increase in consumerism, urbanization, and industrial production. The 1920s also witnessed the widespread adoption of new technologies, such as automobiles and radios, and significant cultural shifts, including the rise of jazz music, flapper culture, and changing social norms.
4) The 18th Amendment to the U.S. Constitution, ratified in 1919, prohibited the manufacturing, sale, and transportation of alcoholic beverages. This period is referred to as the Prohibition era. The amendment aimed to reduce social issues associated with alcohol consumption but ultimately led to an increase in organized crime and the illegal alcohol trade.
5) The pronunciation of "Eveline" in Joyce's work is typically with an initial "e" sound, like "evlin." However, pronunciation can vary depending on regional accents and personal preference.
6) "Keynes" is pronounced as "kanes" (with a long "a" sound) or "keenz." The correct pronunciation may vary based on regional accents.
7) The term "final solution" was a euphemism used by the Nazis during the Holocaust to refer to their plan for the systematic genocide of European Jews. It meant the complete extermination of the Jewish population. Jews were gradually sent to concentration camps starting from the early 1940s, with the mass deportations and killings significantly increasing after 1941.
The date "November 9-10, 1938" can be read as "November ninth to tenth, nineteen thirty-eight."