Thank you very much. Could you check these sentences about the interior monologue.

1) The American psychologist William James coined the phrase “stream of consciousness” to define the continuous flow of thoughts and sensations that characterize the human mind.
2) The stream of consciousness is often confused with interior monologue although they are quite different.
In fact the former describes the psychic phenomenon, while the latter is its verbal expression.
3) The interior monologue has the following features. First, it is immediate since it lacks the conventional syntax and it is free from introductory expressions. It is characterized by two levels of narration: one external to the character’s mind and one internal.
4) It doesn’t follow a chronological or a logical formal order of events and time is perceived as subjective. The rules of punctuation are not respected.
5) In the indirect interior monologue the narrator never lets the character’s flow of thoughts without control, and maintains logical and grammatical organization. The character stays fixed in space while his/her consciousness moves freely in time

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2) Stream of consciousness is often confused with interior monologue although they are quite different.
In fact the former describes the psychic phenomenon, while the latter is its verbal expression.

3) Interior monologue has the following features. First, it is immediate since it lacks the conventional syntax and it is free from introductory expressions. It is characterized by two levels of narration: one external to the character’s mind and one internal.
Where is "Second"?

4) It doesn’t follow a chronological or a logical formal order of events, and time is perceived as subjective. The rules of punctuation are not respected.

5) In indirect interior monologue, the narrator never lets the character’s flow of thoughts _____ without control, and _____ maintains logical and grammatical organization. The character stays fixed in space while his/her consciousness moves freely in time.

These sentences accurately describe the concept of interior monologue. However, there are a few points that can be revised to make them clearer:

1) The American psychologist William James coined the phrase "stream of consciousness" to describe the continuous flow of thoughts and sensations that characterize the human mind.

2) Although often confused with the stream of consciousness, the interior monologue is actually quite different. The stream of consciousness refers to the psychic phenomenon, while the interior monologue is its verbal expression.

3) The interior monologue has the following features: First, it is immediate, lacking conventional syntax and introductory expressions. It is characterized by two levels of narration - one external to the character's mind and one internal.

4) The interior monologue does not follow a chronological or logical formal order of events, and time is subjective in its perception. The rules of punctuation are not strictly adhered to.

5) In the indirect interior monologue, the narrator never allows the character's flow of thoughts to be uncontrolled, maintaining logical and grammatical organization. The character remains fixed in space while their consciousness moves freely in time.

These revisions provide clearer explanations while maintaining the original meaning of the sentences.