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In the article that we read on page 37, the author was trying to explain how everyday life can be stressful. As far as meeting his goal, I think that he could have done a much better job. They did give a few examples of everyday annoyances, but not of how they can cause you stress. The author also jumped around a lot. Instead of sticking with one subject at a time they went back and forth which became very annoying in its self. Maybe if the author would have made the article flow a little better and used more examples then they might have met their goal.

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    We read on page 37? We are not affiliated with Axia, nor wish to be.

    Now I assume you want some help with your analysis.

    First, you seem to jump from person (he, they, author, they, author, they, their). Exactly who are you critiquing?

    Secondly, if this is an opinion paragraph, as you have written, it in fact is your opinion. If it is supposed to be an analysis, you did not give very many facts (or examples) for your argument.

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