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When the movie Star Wars premiered in 1977, it was both surprising and a revolution in its special effects. what is the correct parallel structure

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    I'd write it this way:

    When the movie Star Wars premiered in 1977, its special effects were both surprising and revolutionary.

    Do you see it?

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    it's incorrect It states to try again without using were I have revised this twice and it's telling me it's incorrect

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    Without using "were"? No verb in the sentence??

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