English

posted by .

I forgot to include the following corrections I did myself.

1)In this way, the signs of age and corruption appear IN the picture. He makes a reflection (he meditates upon) about the sadness of war. He dreams of his dying friend. He describes his friend’s death from (not “because of”?) chemical warfare.
2) The entrances to (not of) Dr Jekyll's house. The front one is beautiful whereas the rear one is inhospitable and ugly.
3) In Jekyll's mind the human nature is composed by (OF) two sides, one whole good and the other wholly bad.
Jekyll daydreams to separate (about separating) these two natures and about controlling them.
4)The poet cannot help lunging at his friend as he asks for help and then as he is dying.
5)At the end, to free himself of the portrait, Dorian destroyes it.

  • English -

    1. Why is "IN" in capitals? Use "He meditates upon"; use "death from..."

    2. See your last post that I just responded to.

    3. Delete "the" in front of "human nature" and use "composed of" not "by"; delete "whole" and "wholly" and insert "completely."

    Use "about separating"

    4. OK

    5. destroys (sp)

Respond to this Question

First Name
School Subject
Your Answer

Similar Questions

  1. English

    Hello. Please help me understand the sentence: "I took my picture" (does it mean that I photographed myself or that I took it into my hands just like a book or a scarf). And if I photographed myself, is it possible to say "I took a …
  2. English Literature

    I need to write an essay that will include the following: The Iliad, Richard III, War and Peach and Henry IV. I need to compare and contrast these four stories in relation to war. Can someone help me 1.) with a possible thesis and …
  3. English

    I forgot to include the following examples. I really hope youcan have a look at them, too. 1) Like the stars in the Milky Way, the daffodils are part of a natural order determined by a natural law. 2) The daffodils are presented as …
  4. English

    I forgot to include these very last 2 sentences. I hope you can have a look at them, too. (I included a few phrases on grammmar, too). 1) The story is profoundly allegorical and it can be interpreted as a 19-th century version of the …
  5. English

    I made a few changes myself. Can you please tell me if everything is possible?
  6. English

    I forgot to include the following statements. I hope you can have a look at them, too 1) embarrassed about/at (are the prepositions intercheangable?
  7. English

    Can you please check these sentences? I did some of the corrections myself. 1)He wishes his portrait, made by a painter called Basil, grew old in his place. 2) Dorian wants eternal life and youth whereas Faust aims at/for infinite
  8. English

    I forgot to include these last sentences. Thank you. 1) What does the world outside her window remind Eveline of?
  9. english

    I'm writing a english paper about A Tale of Two Cities to show why/how the topic of law/corruption/power matters from the way Dickens uses it in the text. I am trying to write my intro, but I am having trouble. All I have so far is …
  10. igliterature

    My dreams are of a field afar And blood and smoke and shot. There in their graves my comrades are, In my grave I am not. I too was taught the trade of man And spelt the lesson plain; But they, when I forgot and ran, Remembered and …

More Similar Questions