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According to the statistic, people who win money in casinos lose their time to communicate with their "family members and therefore, have bad relationships with their" parents.
There is one grammatical mistake inside the " ". Can someone please tell me what the mistake is?
I really appreciate that ;)

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    There needs to be a comma before "therefore" as well as after it.

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