can someone critique these questions for me please?

Describe yourself: I was born in Somalia, but my family and I moved to the states when I was 7 yrs. I want to major in respiratory care and minor in biology.
What are your strength/weaknesses. Well my strengths would be that I am a calm and level headed person. I don’t freak out in emergencies. Also, I am a dedicated person; I am able to focus strongly on each task until it’s completed. Also, I love to help people. I feel really good when I do something for another person.
My weakness would be that sometimes I have a hard time saying no to people. But I have learned that I don’t always have to make things perfect for everyone. Sometimes it’s better for a person to overcome their own obstacles. That makes them stronger.

I was born in Somalia, but my family and I moved to the states when I was 7 years old. I want to major in respiratory care and minor in biology.

My strengths are my calm and level headed personality. I don’t panic in emergencies. Also, I am a dedicated person: I am able to focus completely on each task I have until it’s completed. Also, I love to help people. I feel really good when I do something for another person.

One weakness I have is that sometimes I have a hard time saying no to people. I have learned, however, that I don’t always have to make things perfect for everyone. Sometimes it’s better for a person to overcome his or her own obstacles. Dealing with one's own problems makes a person stronger.