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Can you please chech these very last two sentences of the day? Thank you.

I'm playing on my Nintendo DS these days.
Where are you playing these days?
Darwin eliminated the possibility of the creation also if this idea conflicted with the teachings of the Bible and the previous belief of a fixed, unchanging order.

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    The first two sentences are fine.

    Darwin eliminated the possibility of the creation / also if this idea conflicted with the teachings of the Bible and the previous belief of a fixed, unchanging order.

    This sentence needs work. It would be best if you revised it into two sentences, making the break where I put the / mark.

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