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Can you please check these sentences for me, please? Thank you very much.

1)The avenger is involved in complex planning.
2) A lot of murders occur within the play.
3) The hero becomes more and more isolated throughout the play (better: within the play, as the play develops?)
4) The action is delayed by a period of doubt, which wll involve complex planning.
5) The Jews were restricted in the professions they could follow (is "do" possible?)
6) Hamlet plans to avenge (not revenge) the murder of his father. Eventually he gets (has? is possible) his revenge.
7) You didn't stick to the point since you reported the whole plot instead of explaining how he plans to kill Claudius.
8) Do you mind if I leave? Yes, I mind (is it possible?)

  • English -

    1) OK

    2) Many murders occur within the play.

    3) The hero becomes more and more isolated as the play develops.

    4) The action is delayed by a period of doubt, which involves complex planning. (... although I'm not quite sure how doubt can involve complex planning!!)

    5) The Jews were restricted in the professions they could follow. ("do" is not possible, but "have" is.)

    6) Hamlet plans to avenge the murder of his father. Eventually he has his revenge.

    7) OK

    8) Do you mind if I leave? Yes, I mind (is it possible?) <~~"Yes, I mind" is possible if you mean "No, I don't want you to leave."

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