Resume writing

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can someone proofread my resume profile.



Highly motivated University of Maryland University College student seeks exposure to the practical application of Management Studies concepts as a management professional in a dynamic, fast paced corporate environment. Comprehensive understanding of the skills needed to expertly fulfill responsibilities spanning customer service and management support with ease. The ability to leverage superior interpersonal skills, to foster robust relationships with colleagues, clients, and management. I have the ability to deliver outstanding results with the highest degree of expertise and professionalism. I am Flexible and versatile – able to maintain a sense of humor under pressure. Poised and competent with demonstrated ability to easily transcend cultural differences. Thrive in deadline-driven environments. Excellent team-building skills.

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    I'm turned off by so many incomplete sentences.

    It looks like you've combined a bunch of dynamic words that look impressive. But this doesn't say anything about YOU. You haven't given any examples of your experience in these areas.

    If I were an employer, this resume would immediately go in file 13.

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    I agree with Ms. Sue. You need to scrap what you posted above and start again.

    http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/681/01/
    Scroll down to the section called Employment Documents: The Resume...
    Study the entire section and try again.

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