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I have three very last sentences I'd like you to check. Thank you.


1)You limited yourself to reporting what was on the photocopy without revising (rewording) any single sentence. Furthermore, instead of joining your ideas (with)using appropriate linkers such as in the first place, in the second place you even reported the subheadings (I don't know how to express this concept but I'll give you an example).
2) When writing a paragraph on Wordsworth's conception of poetry, you shouldn't start with" The subject of poetry: Poetry should deal with everyday situations or incidents and with ordinary people living in the countryside".
3) Thanks to memory the poet can recollects emotions already lost.
The poet stands apart from the other men thanks to his imaginative capacity.
4) I gave a lot of presents for Christmas and I received a lot too.

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    1) You limited yourself to reporting what was on the photocopy without rewording a single sentence. Furthermore, instead of joining your ideas, using appropriate transitions, such as "in the first place," "in the second place," you even included the original subheadings.

    2) When writing a paragraph on Wordsworth's concept of poetry, you shouldn't start with "The subject of poetry: Poetry should deal with everyday situations or incidents and with ordinary people living in the countryside."

    3) Thanks to memory, the poet can recollect emotions already lost.
    The poet stands apart from other men, thanks to his imagination.

    4) I gave a lot of presents for Christmas, and I received many, too.

    Read and compare VERY carefully so you catch everything I changed ... including commas.

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