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Does this sentence make sense?
They will be my new patients whom I never had a chance to care for since I volunteered at hospital.

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    It's a very awkward sentence, for sure. try this:

    When I volunteered at the hospital, I never had a chance to care for __________. Now that I have my own practice, they will be my new patients.

    You need to say who "they" are. The vagueness of this is part of the problem.

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