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hi i had to write a paper on print media and i sent my paper though writepoint and it said that this phrase of my paper was to wordiness and consider revising nothing inappropriate so what else could i say thank you

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    Without seeing that paper, how would we know how to help you?

    Sra

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    Sra is right. Without seeing the paper itself, there's no way anyone here can know.

    Read through this, make corrections, and then post your corrected paper:

    http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm

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