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A seventeen year old boy, Alex is the main character of the novel. Alex comes from school and find out his father in study. He saw his father talking on the phone. His father Ted Jackson,is a cameraman of Canadian Broadcasting Corporation. He is a risk-taker with a childlike personality. When he was done with phone, he said to Alex , he has assignment in China. Then he asked to Alex to come with him. He went with his father to china. Before went to Beijing, he has interest in military history and he made many clay soldiers at his own home. He simply likes Chinese military . When they arrived at Beijing there was man standing with Jackson mane board in his hands. His name is Lao Xu. Then they arrived at hotel of Beijing.
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A seventeen year old boy, Alex is the main character of the novel. Alex comes from school and finds his father in thestudy. He sees his father talking on the phone. His father Ted Jackson,is a cameraman of the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation. He is a risk-taker with a childlike personality. When he was done with phone, he told Alex that he has an assignment in China. Then he asked Alex to come with him. He went with his father to China. Before hewent to Beijing, he had an interest in military history and he made many clay soldiers at his own home. He simply likes the Chinese military. When they arrived at Beijing there was a man standing with Jackson name board in his hands. His name is Lao Xu. Then they arrived at the hotel in Beijing.
A seventeen-year-old boy named Alex is the main character of the novel. In the story, Alex comes home from school and finds his father in his study, talking on the phone. His father, Ted Jackson, is a cameraman for the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation and is known for being a risk-taker with a childlike personality.
After ending the phone call, Ted informs Alex that he has an assignment in China. Excitedly, he asks Alex if he would like to come along. Alex agrees and accompanies his father to China. Before they leave for Beijing, Alex reveals his interest in military history and his hobby of making clay soldiers at home. He particularly admires the Chinese military.
Upon arriving in Beijing, they spot a man standing with a sign that has Jackson written on it. The man is named Lao Xu and he is there to assist them. They all then proceed to their hotel in Beijing.
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