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But it is your highly regarded Anthropology program that caught my attention. It is with the help of that department that my passion for history and Archeology will flourish, and my dream of becoming an archeologist will be made real.

Is the grammar okay? How about the flow?

  • Helen -

    Why is antropology and archeology capitalized?

    The flow? It is a bit cheesy for me.

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