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could you check this please

Directions: Write an 8-10 sentence paragraph about your morning routine written in passé compose. The paragraph should include the following:

a. 8 activities
b. At least three transitional words such as d'abord, ensuite, puis, enfin
c. all past tense verbs
d. a topic and concluding sentence

Chaque matin je fais ma toilette avant de partir pour l'école ce matin. D'abord je me suis lévée à six heures. Puis, je suis allée dans la salle de bains. Dans la salle de bains je me suis lavée les dents, je me suis brossé les cheveux, et je me suis lavé la figure. Après je brossé les cheveux, je me suis maquillée. Ensuite, je prends le petit-déjeuné. Enfin, je me suis dépêchée à sept heures dix, C'est toujours la même routine.

  • French -

    By the way where i said Après je brossé les cheveux... I meant to say Après je me suis lavé la figure, je me suis maquillée.

  • French -

    Après je brossé les cheveux,= here do you want to say "Afterwards, I brushed my hair?" = Aprés, je me suis brossé les cheveux
    OR
    After having brushed my hair...? = Aprés m'être brossé les cheveux...

    Sra (aka Mme)

    spelling error = je prends le petit-déjeuné. = le petit déjeuner

  • French -

    So, if you were to grade me on this what would you give me. I'm in 10th grade, french II

  • SRA PLZ READ -

    Please read the comment above

  • French -

    Probably 8/10 or a B. Every teacher has a different grading scale. I used to give my students 2 grades. One for creativity and one for grammar!

    Sra (aka Mme)

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