Thank you for all this I will change it all and improve it. But I think I'm just going to stick with the ending part unless you got anything for me. But still anyway thank you for all your help on this poem.
You're welcome! It's great to hear that you found my feedback helpful. If you're satisfied with the ending and don't need any further suggestions, that's perfectly fine. Remember, the most important thing is that you're happy with your work. Keep practicing and refining your poetry skills, and don't hesitate to reach out if you have any other questions or need assistance in the future. Good luck with your poem!
