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This is my digital camera. I will explain this digiatal camera. Push the power button on the right on the top. Then you can use this one. When you push the power button, you can have the picture mode. Press the button on the far right on the top. Then you can take pictures. If you press the button on the middle right, you can see the picture you have taken. Press the button one more time, and you can return to the picture mode. Press the M button, and you can have the video mode. Pressing the far right button, you can videotape what you want. Press the button one more time, and you can stop videotaping. Press the button on the middle right, and press the buttom button of the round button. And you can watch the video. If you press the bottom button one more time, you can pause. If you press the button on the middle right side, you can turn to the video mode. Press the M button on the top right, and you can have the picture mode. In this mode, press the buttom of the round button on the buttom right side. And you can be in the recording mode. Press the button on the right on the top, and you can record voices. To stop recording, press the button again. Then you can stop recording. There is a cover at the bottom. If you push the cover at the bottom to the right side, you can see an SD memory card and a battery. This is a 1 gigabite SD memory card. Push the bottom of it, and it will come out. When you push the bottom after putting the card in, it can be inserted.
This is a battery. If you turn the lever to the right, it will come out. Then you can take it out. I have 3 batteries. So when one battery is out, I can use another. Therefore I can use this digital camera for a long time. I can charge the batteries with this cord. If you push the front part into the digital camera, you can charge the battery. Of course you should connect this cord to the outlet.
What can you do with this digital camera?
You can take a lot of pictures with this one. I ordered an 8 gigabite memory card. It will soon be delivered. So if you have an 8 gigabite memory card, you can take more than 8,000 pictures. You can also videotape what you want for about 8 hours. You can record voices for about 200 hours. It would be very helpful when you go abroad. You can videotape things for more than 8 hours. You can also record sounds for about 250 hours. Isn't it great?
It has a built-in mike, so you can record voices. This one is very useful.
But be careful. When you use this digital camera for a long time, it will become hot and the quality of the pictures will be bad. So you need to give some rest to the digital camera after you use it for some time.

( Would you check my composition? Thank you.)

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    This is my digital camera. I will explain this digiatal camera. Push the power button on the right on the top, and choose picture mode. Press the button on the far right on the top. Then you can take pictures. If you press the button on the middle right, you can see the picture you have taken. Press the button one more time, and you can return to the picture mode. Press the M button, and you can have the video mode. Pressing the far right button, you can videotape what you want. Press the button one more time, and you can stop videotaping. Press the button on the middle right, and press the buttom button of the round button, so you can watch the video. If you press the bottom button one more time, you can pause. If you press the button on the middle right side, you can turn to the video mode. Press the M button on the top right, and you can have the picture mode. In this mode, press the buttom of the round button on the buttom right side. And you can be in the recording mode. Press the button on the right on the top, and you can record voices. To stop recording, press the button again. Then you can stop recording. There is a cover at the bottom. If you push the cover at the bottom to the right side, you can see an SD memory card and a battery. This is a 1 gigabite SD memory card. Push the bottom of it, and it will come out. When you push the bottom after putting the card in, it can be inserted.
    Not bad. There are some spelling errors that a good spell-checker will catch, such as "digital" and "gigabyte" and "bottom" and "button." Also, you need to think about combining sentences so you don't repeat the same wording too much. Your writing will be monotonous if you don't have varied sentences. I've made a couple of sentence-combining suggestions in your paragraph above, and there are more ideas in this link:
    http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/combining_skills.htm


    This is a battery. If you turn the lever to the right, the battery will come out. Then you can take it out.<~~delete that sentence; it's repetitive. I have 3 batteries. So when one battery is out, I can use another. In this way, I can use this digital camera for a long time. I can charge the batteries with this cord. If you push the front part into the digital camera, you can charge the battery. Of course you should connect this cord to the outlet.
    Consider some more sentence combining.

    What can you do with this digital camera? You can take a lot of pictures with this one. I ordered an 8 gigabite memory card. It will soon be delivered. So if you have an 8 gigabite memory card, you can take more than 8,000 pictures. You can also videotape what you want for about 8 hours. You can record voices for about 200 hours. It would be very helpful when you go abroad. You can videotape things for more than 8 hours. You can also record sounds for about 250 hours. Isn't it great?
    More sentence combining is needed, and watch some of the spelling.

    It has a built-in mike, so you can record voices. This one is very useful.
    But be careful. When you use this digital camera for a long time, it will become hot and the quality of the pictures will be bad. So you need to give the camera a rest after you use it for some time.

    Overall, you've done very well. Just focus on making sure all spelling errors are taken care of and work on learning to combine sentences when needed.

    =)

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    check spelling of digital. "I will explain this digiatal camera." = sentence 2

    Outstanding job = looks like "show and tell!"

    Sra

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