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Could you please see if i have translated the following sentences correctly. Thanks
1. Five objects I would choose to have in my dungeon are
(Cinq objets que je choisirais d'avoir dans mon cachot sont)
2. A computer to keep in contact with friends and family.
(Un ordinateur à garder en contact avec les amis et la famille.)
3. A bath tub so I can take a fresh shower everyday.
(Un baquet ainsi moi de bain peut prendre une douche fraîche journalière.)
4. A bed so I can sleep well everynight and for a nap during the day.
( Un lit ainsi moi peut dormir everynight bon et pour un petit somme pendant le jour.)
5. A refridgerator with a lot of food to keep me strong and healthy.
( Un refridgerator avec beaucoup de nourriture de me maintenir fort et en bonne santé.)
6. A picture of my family so I will never forget what they look like.
(Une image de ma famille ainsi de moi n'oubliera jamais à ce que ressemblent elles.)

  • French -

    !1 = delete "d'" = choisirai avoir.....

    #2 pour prendre contact avec.....

    #3 Une baignoire pour prendre une douche chaque jour. SIMPLIFY what you are trying to say if it becomes cumbersome. Translating LITERALLY (or word for word) often does not flow well. Always try to use the structures/vocabulary you have mastered in class.

    #4 (ainsi is "thus" so it seems stilted hee) Un lit pour pouvoir bien dormir chaque soir et pour faire un petit somme pendant le jour.

    #5 Un réfrigérature (spelling) avc beaucoup de nourriture pour être forte et en forme fit.

    #6 Une image (OR une photographie = depends upon what you mean by "picture") de ma famille pour ne jamais oublier comment sont-ils.

    Mme

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