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Can someone help me to check the grammar to see whether this paragraph make sense or not. if not, can you help me to correct it. thanks!!

The report on the issues of feminism shapes both the stereotypes of women and the impact of the audience. Some feminists criticize the researches on women's magazines that they have become the tool of patriarchal domination, which make for the endorsement of ideological hegemony. Recently, many take the text as the main scope of discussion from different audience¡¦s perspectives to emphasize the readers¡¦ willingness to revolt against the hegemony¡Xthe patriarchal ideology, but little from the production-oriented to analyze the pros and cons.

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    The report on the issues of feminism shapes both the stereotypes of women<~~Do you mean the stereotypes women generally believe? Or do you mean the stereotypes about women that are out there? and the impact of the audience.<~~Did the audience hit (impact) something? Or did something hit the audience? And what audience? Some feminists criticize the researches<~~?? on women's magazines that they<~~the "researches" or the magazines? have become the tool of patriarchal domination, which make for the endorsement of ideological hegemony.<~~What?? That last clause needs to be a sentence of its own and greatly clarified. Recently, many take the text<~~What text? as the main scope of discussion from different audience's<~~Do you mean only one audience's perspectives or many audiences' perspectives? perspectives to emphasize the readers' willingness to revolt<~~Do you mean "rebel"? against the hegemony¡Xthe patriarchal ideology, but little from the production-oriented to analyze the pros and cons.<~~What?? You really need to separate this last sentence into more than one sentence and greatly clarify everything. Hegemony? Production-oriented?? Pros and cons??

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