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Thus, the Nurse sees the purpose of the asylum as a place to be conformed is to persuade the patients to accept and function in the Outside world of rewards and punishments.


How do I reword "to be conformed"? I don't like the idea of using "to be" in any essays.

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    You could use conformation.
    http://www.answers.com/conformation

    ... the asylum as a place of conformation where patients are persuaded to accept ...

    or

    ... the asylum as a place to promote conformation where she needs to persuade patients to accept ...

    or

    ... the asylum as a place to force conformation where patients are trained to accept ...

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