Can someone please proofread my history essay?

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Hi, I have a history essay and I think it's done but I'd like someone to proofread it and suggest corrections first, can someone here please do that? Thanks! :-)

P.S. It's due tomorrow

Here's the essay:

John Musbach
History
02/14/07

My thesis statement is: Through the power of very active religious groups a movement was created to abolish the use of alcohol and while it may have initially showed some progress, due to the ever growing number of citizens who were against prohibition, prohibition failed which resulted in alcohol being in mainstream use once again.











































John Musbach
History
02/14/07

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