English- Inclusive Language

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1)His grandmother really enjoys spending the afternoon at the center for senior citizens.

2)One of the high points of our trip was seeing the Canadian Eskimos in their traditional garb.

3)Her brother's friend is an AIDS victim.

4) It's hard to believe that a woman her age could accomplish so much.

Please let us know what you think needs to be changed (if anything) in each of these sentences, and someone here will give you feedback.

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