CAN YOU HELP ME .. IF YOU CAN READ MY PREVIOUS POSTAGES ON ETH I JUST NEED SOMEONE TO READ WHAT I HAVE AND TELL ME IF I'M COVERING ALL THE POINTS OR WHAT THEY EVEN THINK ABOUT IT AND GIVE ME POINTERS.
A number of us are working on it. If we can help, we will post. Thanks.
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According to payne in making enemies she contends that throughout the united states there has been increased prejudice against muslims and arabs after 9/11 . she also contends that htis was exacerbated by the united states government's actions, and response, to these people in response to the terrorist attacks. more then just effectively condoning this type of behavior it also served to encourage discrimination as an act of pariotism.
The strong negative emotional aspect itied to mislims and arabs after 9/11 would entice a greater incidence of hate crimes against these groups. This would only be aggravated, as payne suggested, by those who were more patriotic;as treating muslims and arabs would beperceived as supporitng the United States. Furthermore, the affective prejudice made the arabs and muslims seem like lesser americans, or not amercan at all, and thus not entiled to the treatment that others deserve.
There are a number of htings that can be done to promote tolerance within local cities. A good portion of the danger is caused by ignorance of islam and arab culture. this could be mitigated by having a muslim talk about both culture and religion to groups of people in places usch as at churches, schools, and other large group gatherings. secondarily, local news outlets should be encouraged to do stories that positively report on islam and arab culture to reach an even broader audience. finally those that are not prejudiced hsould encourage multi-culture gatherings, and personally participate in these events and organizations.
1. The lack of consistent capitalization of the first words of sentences and the lack of paragraph separation make this very difficult to read.
2. Payne or Pyne???
3. I don't see any section relating to (2) in your assignment. If it's there, then you're too subtle!
4. The other parts of the assignment seem to be addressed.
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