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What is a PERFECT essay about Sandy Hook Elementary School?

asked by Alexis
  1. A perfect essay (if there is such a thing) has a clear thesis statement, at least three carefully thought out supporting arguments, and has a dynamic introduction and conclusion. Of course, it also is meticulously edited and follows all grammar rules.

    posted by Ms. Sue
  2. I need more info I am having so much trouble. I am only in 7th grade

    posted by Alexis
  3. What do you want to say about Sandy Hook?

    posted by Ms. Sue
  4. I want to say like how we could help support Sandy Hook but at the same time I want to include many of the names.

    posted by Alexis
  5. You need to be more specific. How can we support Sandy Hook?

    posted by Ms. Sue
  6. Donate money to them???? I don't know this is WAY too hard. I have been working on this all weekend and it is due tomorrow

    posted by Alexis
  7. I doubt if they need money.

    What exactly is your assignment?

    posted by Ms. Sue
  8. I have to come up with a 2 page paper about Sandy Hook including : names of all victims, opinion, and what we could do to support Sandy Hook and the only part i am stuck on is that I don't know what to write for support! And my opinion!

    posted by Alexis
  9. My personal opinion is the way to support Sandy Hook is to enact stricter gun control laws and make sure that everyone who owns a gun is sane and not violent.

    http://www.google.com/search?q=support+sandy+hook&oq=support+sandy&aqs=chrome.1.69i57j0l5.14955j0j8&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=93&ie=UTF-8

    posted by Ms. Sue
  10. I wrote the 1st paragraph and then got stuck. Thank you for the help but I could ask my mom for help

    posted by Alexis
  11. The reason you got stuck is that you hadn't planned your essay first. Your first paragraph is the last paragraph to write.

    I urge you to read some of the websites I posted for you. Also, follow the instructions I gave you first.

    posted by Ms. Sue
  12. Okay.

    posted by Alexis
  13. I did what you said but nothing is coming to me

    posted by Catheline-Anne Marie
  14. Sorry that was my sister. She is 10. She typed what I wanted her to while i did something

    posted by Alexis

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