Rewrite this passage using the corect punctuation..one suuny day mrs brown decided to take her family for a picnic in the new forest she made a big pile of sandwiches and put them in a plastic box colin packed some cans of coca cola for the children to drink mr brown make a flask of coffe for himself and his wife tom filled a tin with biscuits and tiny cakes sarah put oranges plums apples and bananas into a bag when the food was ready they packed it in the boot of the car and set off their day out
One sunny day Mrs. Brown decided to take her family for a picnic in the new forest.
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One sunny day, Mrs. Brown decided to take her family for a picnic in the New Forest. She made a big pile of sandwiches and put them in a plastic box. Colin packed some cans of Coca Cola for the children to drink. Mr. Brown made a flask of coffee for himself and his wife. Tom filled a tin with biscuits and tiny cakes. Sarah put oranges, plums, apples, and bananas into a bag. When the food was ready, they packed it in the boot of the car and set off for their day out.
Rewrite this passage using the correct punctuation:
One sunny day, Mrs. Brown decided to take her family for a picnic in the New Forest. She made a big pile of sandwiches and put them in a plastic box. Colin packed some cans of Coca-Cola for the children to drink. Mr. Brown made a flask of coffee for himself and his wife. Tom filled a tin with biscuits and tiny cakes. Sarah put oranges, plums, apples, and bananas into a bag. When the food was ready, they packed it in the boot of the car and set off for their day out.