I have a big long paragraph with a bunch of dialogue in it. Can anyone explain to me how to put the dialouge in paragraphs? thanks:)
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/quotation.htm
Scroll down to the paragraph that begins with the words "Convention normally insists ... " and you'll see a good example.
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Thanks:) but i'm still confused... is this how i put it in paragraphs.
Leper decided he wanted to qualify for the Super Suicide Society, so he announced his intention to make the leap. I went into Gene’s room to inform him on the news, and to see if he wanted to tag along. When I told Gene about the jump, he seemed very unconfident that Leper would jump.
I guess I was right because Gene said, “Leper Lepellier would go down paralyzed with panic on any sinking troopship before making such a jump.”
I urged Gene to come, but he seemed ticked off about something.
Then Gene exclaimed as he slammed his French book closed, “Oh for heaven’s sake.”
“What’s the matter,” I asked.
Gene snarled, “I’m studying, I don’t want to ruin my grade just to go see Leper chicken out and not jump.”
So I said, “Don’t come, it’s fine with me."
Gene seemed surprised and said, “Never mind, forget my studying, I joined the Super Suicide Society, and I’m going.”
Yes, that looks correct.
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Certainly! I can help you understand how to organize dialogue in paragraphs.
When it comes to incorporating dialogue into paragraphs, it's important to follow a few guidelines to make your writing clearer and easier to read. Here's a step-by-step guide:
1. Start a new paragraph for each new speaker: Whenever a new character starts speaking, begin a new paragraph. This helps the reader keep track of who is speaking and prevents confusion. For example:
"I love going for long walks in the park," Mary said.
John chuckled and replied, "That makes two of us! I find it so peaceful."
2. Indent the dialogue: For each line of dialogue, you should indent it from the left margin. This helps distinguish the spoken words from the rest of the text. For example:
"Do you have any plans for the weekend?" Lisa asked.
"Not really," replied Mark. "I might just stay in and relax."
3. Use quotation marks to enclose dialogue: It's important to use quotation marks at the beginning and end of each line spoken by a character. This makes it clear that those words are being spoken. For example:
"Let's go out for dinner tonight," Tom suggested.
Jane smiled and eagerly responded, "That sounds like a great idea!"
By following these guidelines, you can effectively structure dialogue in paragraphs, making your writing more organized and readable!