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i had a parargrahp writen i want you to check if its right orno t.

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  1. riffat, your paragraph did not post. Please copy/paste. One of the teachers will be more than happy to help you with suggestions.

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  2. And if copying and pasting doesn't work, you'll need to type it in yourself. Either way, someone here will be happy to help.

    =)

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  3. Best Day of My Life
    The best day of my life was my surprise birthday party. I was thirteen years old when I used to live in Pakistan. In those days my dad was in Pakistan, too. My parents already arranged everything for my birthday party. Everybody knew about my birthday party except me. The day of my birthday started and I didn’t tell anyone because I was waiting for someone to say but nobody remembered my birthday not even my parents. Therefore, I ate breakfast and got ready for school. My mom asked me where I was going. I was going to school. She said, “Don’t go to school today because we are going to aunty house.” She invited our family to a restaurant for dinner. Everyone was getting ready, but I was thinking that nobody remembered my birthday. When we got to the place I was shocked because I saw my relatives there and a lot more people. We got out of the car and went inside of the restaurant. When I entered inside, everyone clapped and said Happy birthday to you. I looked at my parents and said thank you so much. We all went inside and cut the cake. After cutting the cake, I go wishes and gift from everyone. My parents gave me a small gold set. Then we had dinner in a restaurant, and everyone kept wishing me. It was the best day of my life and a big surprise. I was tired and happy. This day was very special for me, which I will never forgot in my life.

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  4. what is a negative connotation and how do I make it a positive connotation?example:Traffic along Maple Street today was horrible, all because of a family of silly geese.
    The two words that need to be changed are horrible and silly.
    thanks michelle

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  5. Best Day of My Life
    The best day of my life was my surprise birthday party. I was thirteen years old when I used to live in Pakistan. In those days my dad was in Pakistan, too. My parents already arranged everything for my birthday party. Everybody knew about my birthday party except me. The day of my birthday started and I didn’t tell anyone because I was waiting for someone to say but nobody remembered my birthday not even my parents. Therefore, I ate breakfast and got ready for school. My mom asked me where I was going. I was going to school. She said, “Don’t go to school today because we are going to aunty house.” She invited our family to a restaurant for dinner. Everyone was getting ready, but I was thinking that nobody remembered my birthday. When we got to the place I was shocked because I saw my relatives there and a lot more people. We got out of the car and went inside of the restaurant. When I entered inside, everyone clapped and said Happy birthday to you. I looked at my parents and said thank you so much. We all went inside and cut the cake. After cutting the cake, I go wishes and gift from everyone. My parents gave me a small gold set. Then we had dinner in a restaurant, and everyone kept wishing me. It was the best day of my life and a big surprise. I was tired and happy. This day was very special for me, which I will never forgot in my life.

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